snow melting – tan renga

July 9, 2016August 15, 2018 / Ken / rivrvlogr

snow melting

snow melting–
where ducks are nesting
soft moonlight
© Issa

thin layer of ice melting
diving soon for tasty shoots

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #106, write two lines to follow a given hokku, essentially creating a tanka. Original haiku written by Kobayashi Issa (1763-1828)

Image source: rockymountaindayhikes.com

5 thoughts on “snow melting – tan renga”

anisioluiz2008

July 9, 2016 at 11:14 am

Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.

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humbird

July 9, 2016 at 2:12 pm

Like the transition to new growth…

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- rivrvlogr
  
  July 10, 2016 at 4:05 am
  
  Changing seasons
  
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rudraprayaga

July 9, 2016 at 5:12 pm

I’ve read all the ones.All seemed pretty and no doubt this one too.

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- rivrvlogr
  
  July 9, 2016 at 11:30 pm
  
  Thank you.
  
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