by the mountain spring – tan renga

/ Ken / rivrvlogr

by the mountain spring

by the mountain spring
we talk about the same things
just in other words
                    © Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė

our eyes wells of emotion
while splashing water translates

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #104, write two lines to follow a given hokku, essentially creating a tanka, using the photo provided.  The original haiku is by Lithuanian poetess Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė.
Carpe Diem Tan Renga Chain

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