by the mountain spring
we talk about the same things
just in other words
© Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė
our eyes wells of emotion
while splashing water translates
This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #104, write two lines to follow a given hokku, essentially creating a tanka, using the photo provided. The original haiku is by Lithuanian poetess Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė.
Love the sounds in your addition….
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Wells and water translating words – fabulous!
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It would be nice if it were that easy, wouldn’t it?
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