Cherry Blossom Viewing – tan renga

Cherry Blossom Viewing

carrying his mother
and leading his child by the hand
cherry blossom!
© Issa

beautiful and respectful
tradition as seasons pass

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 8th, write two lines to follow a given haiku, essentially creating a tanka.

Carpe Diem Tan Renga

3 thoughts on “Cherry Blossom Viewing – tan renga

  1. Welcome at Carpe Diem i am glad to see you here. Your completion of this Tan Renga is very good. In your two lines you have responded on the three generations in the haiku by Issa and you bring ‘tradition’ into it.
    Tan Renga is a traditional form that goes way back to the medieval ages.

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