no stray walk,
our life together
a shared view
of two hearts
with the promise of a beat
that never grows old
The Secret Keeper’s Weekly Word Prompt #24 provides the words walk, old, promise, view and beat. My response is a shadorma.
Shadorma ~ any number of stanzas, six lines each with a syllable progression of 3-5-3-3-7-5
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Lovely.
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I like it. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you.
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that is so beautiful
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Thank you.
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The perfect poem of love and true union. It is solidly fill overflowing with deep meaning. A well written Shaforma. Concise with each word. If someone were given declaring their conviction to another, it would be the most amazing reassurance of the commitment shared. – jk
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Thank you.
I couldn’t ask for better praise.
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